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Complete this Supported Opinion Graphic Organizer to answer the question:
Does finding Franklin’s Erebus contribute to our understanding of the Arctic and its
people today?
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Topic Sentence/Argument
Address the stated question by stating
an opinion that will be supported with
your research.
NOTE: This is not necessarily your
opinion.
Finding Franklin’s Erebus truly contributed to further research and
understandings of the Arctic. The intensive hours spent looking helped
citizens become more aware of the tragic mystery that occurred in the Arctic
more than a century ago.
Point #1
Identify something you have noticed
about how finding Franklin’s ship has
contributed to our understanding of
the Arctic and its people.
Supports your main Argument.
Through use of technology, individuals were able to expand their research
regarding the Arctic as the exploration in the Arctic is limited. This mission
allowed Parks Canada to gather more information about Franklin’s Ship along
with the Arctic Region.
Evidence in Support
(proof)
Identify the source of your proof and
make sure that your proof is factual
(quote, fact, provable).
For instance, in this episode of “Nature of Things by David Suzuki”, Parks
Canada used many different methods of advanced technology to find the
ship. The technology used also gave a better image of the ocean floor that
individuals do not get to see.
Explanation/Significance
Thorough explanation of how the
evidence connects the evidence and
the point to the argument.
This is significant to the understanding of the Arctic as this mission allowed
for more in-depth research to be done. Without the help of the latest
technologies, it would have become difficult to gain more knowledge
regarding the Arctic. The ocean floor of the Arctic is an important way that
researchers are able to explore the distribution of the corals and gain a better
understanding towards the biodiversity that remains beneath the sea level.
Point #2
Identify something you have noticed
about how finding Franklin’s ship has
contributed to our understanding of
the Arctic and its people.
Supports your main Argument
Also, having researchers from Parks Canada in the Arctic provided the public
with much more information regarding the conditions that exist.
Evidence in Support
(proof)
Identify the source of your proof and
make sure that your proof is factual
(quote, fact, provable).
For example, the researchers were able take a dive into the ocean to see the
ship first hand. The divers in the documentary proclaimed that the dive in the
Arctic was a mesmerizing experience. These individuals were able to see a
world that no one gets to see.
Explanation/Significance
Thorough explanation of how the
evidence connects the evidence and
the point to the argument.
This shows that individuals directly saw the biodiversity in the Arctic, they
were able to provide more insight regarding the conditions in the Arctic.
These individuals were submerged into the world of the Arctic, they are able
to report information that concerns the Arctic environment. This allows not
only the Government to gain more knowledge but, also the citizens also gain
more of an understanding the circumstances that exist in the Arctic.
Point #3
Identify something you have noticed
about how finding Franklin’s ship has
contributed to our understanding of
the Arctic and its people.
Supports your main Argument.
Lastly, the assistance of the Inuit’s helped citizens gain more information
about the environment in the Arctic. Without the help of the Inuit’s, there
would be minimal information as to the location of the ship.
Evidence in Support
(proof)
Identify the source of your proof and
make sure that your proof is factual
(quote, fact, provable).
As stated in the documentary, the Inuit’s were a huge contribution to finding a
location of the ship. They were the prime reason that the ships were found as
they provided the researchers with a limited area in which there search
should occur.
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